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The Lost Lenore
New Member
since 2012-01-16
Posts 4


0 posted 2017-08-30 12:41 PM




Im bad at writing poetry
This I can attest
I have no idea how to form a verse
Or know what a stanza is

Someone told me once
Rhyming is the way
But if you have a word like purple
Nothing rhymes with that

To wrack my brain in pondering
How to write the best
I need to open a thasaurus
Will I even past this test?

Poetry is not my forte
English was my worst
I do remeber some things tho
Like refrain, trochee and verse

I guess I have figured out the verse part
That was simple enough
But other things like foot or quatrain
I have no idea as I was out sick that day

So here I am trying my hand
At something I fear will be bad
I wrote this in less than ten minutes
For a bad poetry contest my work place had.

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Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-08-30 04:03 PM


Oh, but you are 'Lenore'...and a right fine one at that!


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2017-08-30 07:27 PM


I, too, think you did quite well, my friend . . . you definitely rhyme much better than I, since I can't rhyme anything at all!

by the way ... "thasaurus" should be "thesaurus" I believe.

j.

MICHELMAS
Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305
Lancashire England
3 posted 2017-09-01 10:48 AM


Rhyme
If you write a poem
The words you have to find
You had best be knowing
An orange has a rind
Plums are nice when tender
I prefer them purple
Then you may remember
Purple rhymes with Turtle

Best wishes
Michael

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2017-09-01 01:43 PM


humility is good for poetry, for oneself and for others, i consider your poem so, with respect, (i don't care a lot for rhymes),i Feel a good sharing here


yann

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
5 posted 2017-09-02 12:39 PM


Definitely nothing wrong with your writing Poet   Pleased to meet you ~ Keep smiling and writing ~ Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2017-09-04 03:38 PM


You are a poet after my own heart writing about not being able to write and producing a delightful poem. I sense you may be full of whimsy, in which case I can't wait to read what you have next in mind. You were a great read! ~L
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