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Poet In Pink
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The color of my mood is gray
Just like the clouds that paint the day
These tears of mine meet oceans blue
As I am filled with thoughts of you

I still envision your sweet face
Our memories I can't erase
Into the wind I bare my soul
This deep sadness I can't control

Hurt seeps from my every pore
Finding happiness is a chore
Just before pain starts to depart
It crushes hope and steals my heart

The color of my mood is gray
Just like the clouds that paint the day
Wildflowers dance along the shore
But as for me I'll dance no more

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 08-26-2017 05:53 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I feel you here.  Your pain and emotion are clear and concise leaving me with an ache.  But that is the magic of poetry to make one feel deeply. ..as always your photos are an added bonus.  
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 08-26-2017 06:33 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Pinkymint,
You do heartache like nobody's business. Your work has such a sweet and delicate feel to it and as always you have way with color. ~L
secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 08-27-2017 07:06 AM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

VERY emotive 'write' !

... and, the photo-image captures the spirit of every lovely thing feminine !
Marchmadness
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4 posted 08-27-2017 05:41 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Enjoyed.

2islander2
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5 posted 08-28-2017 05:52 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

sweet melancholia, well expressed, in pink color of course
yann
jwesley
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6 posted 08-29-2017 02:13 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Yeah. Agree with all Blue's words.

(now why was I expecting text in pink?) lol


j.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 08-30-2017 08:54 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I've seen a few gray days...james
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8 posted 09-02-2017 12:13 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Hello Blues Thank you for the read and your kind comment ~ Always nice to hear from you ~ Alana
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Thankies LoriBoo for your more than kind words ~ Glad you enjoyed!  Pinkymint
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10 posted 09-02-2017 12:15 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Hello Bruce   Always appreciate your time & comments my friend ~ Thank you!  Alana
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Thank you Ida   Glad to hear you enjoyed ~ Appreciate you reading ~ Alana
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Hello Yann   Thank you bunches for stopping in to read ~ Always a joy to read your comments ~ Alana
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13 posted 09-02-2017 12:18 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Thank you Jimmy   Yes....Wonder why you would expect that!  Silly you!  lol  Alana
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14 posted 09-02-2017 12:19 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Thank you for reading and commenting James   Sorry to hear you have, but I suppose we all have at one time or another ~ Alana
 
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