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This is the Love

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soul drifter
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0 posted 08-25-2017 09:45 PM       View Profile for soul drifter   Email soul drifter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for soul drifter

This is the Love

At the end of another beginning
I'm drunk on the sweetness of winning
beauty has scarred me back to whole
love and light is a sacred space
and all the planets take their place
from this distance I can still feel the pull

Your heart in sync with mine
pumping a new kind of wine
mingling together like the rivers of all my dreaming
between the roses and the thorns so much meaning
it's magical
beautiful
and I know where it comes from
and where it goes
and it'll never ever be enough
this is the love

At the beginning of another end
I count steps till you come 'round the bend
these hands hunger for you to hold
love and light is a soft cool flame
and all the planets speak your name
from this distance I'm stirred by your soul

Your heart in sync with mine
pumping a new kind of wine
mingling together like the rivers of all my dreaming
between the roses and the thorns so much meaning
it's magical
beautiful
and I know where it comes from
and where it goes
and it'll never ever be enough
this is the love

Separate the clouds from the blue
and find what's underneath
see the blending of me and you
and find a new kind of belief
what was once one is two
and of all the love I thought I knew
this is the love
this is the love

And it's magical
beautiful
it's magical
nothing more beautiful

I know where it comes from
and where it goes
and it'll never ever be enough
it'll never be enough
and it's all I've ever dreamed of
this is the love
this is the love
and I can't ever get enough
of this love

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


1 posted 08-26-2017 04:21 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Oh my gosh...this is beyond magical.  There is so much to love about your poem.  The rose is definitely not without thorns. and like love the river runs deep.  Mostly I loved the the stars and how the planet's line up.  The soft cool flame is the real kicker though...and wine to go with it no less. *swoon*  
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


2 posted 08-30-2017 10:54 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

"Your heart in sync with mine
pumping a new kind of wine
mingling together like the rivers of all my dreaming
between the roses and the thorns so much meaning
"

my favorite lines...
JamesMichael
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3 posted 08-30-2017 08:56 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice....james
jwesley
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4 posted 09-01-2017 12:32 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Just beautiful, my friend . . .

j.
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