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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2017-08-19 09:39 AM


vicious in the name of amour
measured and satisfying
moderation gives her satisfaction
as you see to her needs
enchanting and mouth-watering
it is called many things
all you have to know these things
to understand
two people along together
feel they are
the only two people in the world
they use one another
and the giving and taking are one
are the same
if both hearts beats with love for the other

©August 16, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2017 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2017-08-19 11:22 AM


such essential loving, unity makes the difference, thanks jerry


yann

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2017-08-19 11:32 AM


Ahh . . . The thanks go out to you, yann.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
3 posted 2017-08-20 10:36 AM


Jerry,
   I am really enjoying this. I've read it several times, and see each more each time.
again, much enjoyed.

        miscellanea

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2017-08-20 10:58 AM


Thank you so much, miscellanea, for your attention to my poem. It makes me very happy to know that you are getting so much out of this poem. Thank you again.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2017-09-03 08:39 PM


Very much enjoyed, Jerry - I have to ask the question (and suspect won't get an answer if I'm right - for awhile) -

Is your unit down again??

Sorry if it is my man . . .


j.

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2017-09-03 08:42 PM


No, my friend, I'm good, just backing off for a while.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
7 posted 2017-09-03 09:22 PM


As it should be JerryPat, from top to bottom.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2017-09-03 09:27 PM


Thank you very much, Bluesy, and I absolutely believe you are right on.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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