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2islander2
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while driving,
I write,
because I drive,
I cross landscapes,
while I drive,
I think of you, lost beneath the stars
The absentee always presents,
I drive,
I become again a judge
Of my loves,
I become again a poet
And desire the world,
Runner of landscapes
Rather than of underskirts,
I drive.

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Nice writing and driving...james
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Love this Yann!!  I do that when I drive also ~ The mind just kind of drifts along and thinks while driving. Some of my poetry has come to me while driving ~ I could hardly wait to get home to write it down before I forgot it!  lol  Much enjoyed the read   Alana
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thanks james, smiley too


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4 posted 08-18-2017 08:46 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

hello , alana, it is exactly what i Do. your comment is so accurate for inspiration. during some years, i remember rushing home, repeating verses. Now I always have a 'white carnet" besides me dor writing, it is easier and I get more freedom.


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