Open Poetry #50 |
why she ? |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Why she? Because she lives in Bosphorus, Because she is crazy in the rum, Because she raises the foresail Over the moon. Why to eat her friends, Why to draw sheeps, Why to take time, To speak with her of something else, Because she makes crazy, Because she knows how to play the violin, That she says yes at the same time as not, That she includes California, Why she? Because Montaigne annoys her, Because her lipstick is lashed, Because she says no to the school, Because she tells yes the boys, In rockets and in huts in wood, Because she goes farther That the words and the books, Because she likes the pink, Because her secret garden is an eagle, Why she? Because it is her, because it is me. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (08-15-2017 11:30 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep. Last line,my friend, that is why. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Jerry for the fair comment yann |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
You have got me thinking with this write dear Yann ~ I know there is probably much more meaning to this that I do not understand ~ I have read it several times...and got the meaning for myself out of it ~ I always enjoy reading you Alana |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hI alana, this need some explanation, because I Use this process sometimes. Don't try to understand, the images are pure fiction, written like surrealist poets did in 20th century. They broke the meaning for inventing new poetry. the poem is a mix of jeux de mots, of experiences, of dreams. Don't be surprised if you dont't get it. just accept to read the crazyness of a love poem. yann |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
islander, I really liked the feel of this and the imagery. The subject--yep! Don't we all ask why she or he at some point, to find all kinds if crazy reasons that aren't so crazy fitting your soul so perfectly. misce' |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you si much misceallena yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...james |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks james |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, the last line! Boils it all down so succinctly. The rest is just dressing - but isn't almost everything better with dressings?" Well done, my friend j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks a lot jwesley, i love your metaphor, all is better with dressings yann |
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