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2islander2
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by the sea


0 posted 08-09-2017 12:17 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for 2islander2

A great moment of solitude,
Between the rise and the sunset,
When you speak to me about poetry,
As if it was a disease.

Your dreams are more down-to-earth,
They sweep the dust of past,
That we have all in the heart
When we take care only of one.

Let us not hunt any more the elephants,
Nor the poems of Manhattan at noon,
Let us party in writing.

My sonnet is not really nasty,
however do not count his feet,
He will go to fall asleep wisely having washed himself.
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1 posted 08-09-2017 01:35 PM       View Profile for Cerulean   Email Cerulean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerulean

This poem is an interesting exercise in creativity. Thanks for sharing, Yann.
2islander2
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2 posted 08-09-2017 08:28 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks a lot cerulean, it was a rather spontaneous poem, looking at the sea, and thinking about the rigidity of the sonnet and its form, i only hope it was pleasant to read
yann
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Dear Yann this definitely is far from crazy!  As always your thoughts are a pleasant read Alana
2islander2
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4 posted 08-11-2017 09:39 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks Alanna, what can i think so far ? may be your are right. not so crazy, nice too to read you again.


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