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Open Poetry #50

a crazy sonnet

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-08-09 12:17 PM

A great moment of solitude,
Between the rise and the sunset,
When you speak to me about poetry,
As if it was a disease.

Your dreams are more down-to-earth,
They sweep the dust of past,
That we have all in the heart
When we take care only of one.

Let us not hunt any more the elephants,
Nor the poems of Manhattan at noon,
Let us party in writing.

My sonnet is not really nasty,
however do not count his feet,
He will go to fall asleep wisely having washed himself.

Cerulean
Member
Posts 109

1 posted 2017-08-09 01:35 PM

This poem is an interesting exercise in creativity. Thanks for sharing, Yann.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2017-08-09 08:28 PM

thanks a lot cerulean, it was a rather spontaneous poem, looking at the sea, and thinking about the rigidity of the sonnet and its form, i only hope it was pleasant to read
yann

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

3 posted 2017-08-11 08:12 PM

Dear Yann this definitely is far from crazy! As always your thoughts are a pleasant read Alana

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2017-08-11 09:39 PM

thanks Alanna, what can i think so far ? may be your are right. not so crazy, nice too to read you again.

yann

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