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Namyh
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Your Touch

You touch and Iím left dangling on a string with heart expanding
and I do believe no angling will relieve me of its load
for now Iím captured, snared and raptured by sensations
manufactured on a countdown to a fracture bursting to explode.

Out blast those tingling impacts riding nerves to every synapse
telling knees and legs they might collapse upon this flattened floor.                                                                                             Iím drenched in breathless breathing that now blinds my
heart perceiving why my lungs and mouth are grieving since
thereís oxygen no more

Ďcause your aroma sends me reeling with hypnotic smell careening
into muscle, flesh and bone at rates which canít be charted
and I would spend forever basking in your breath with everlasting
hope youíd never end my gasping only just now started.

And from this magic moment transfixed, I will find your image
did fix in my mind when Time does insist I have reached my end.
Iíll walk Eternity without the stumbling on legs and feet made
whole from crumbling Ďcause thoughts of you will brace my
tumbling down that breakless bend.

Namyh



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Very cute poem that speaks of being moonstruck. You really have a talent for very descriptive writing. Keep it up, Namyh!
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Awesome from start to finish! Love what you do with words Namyh ~ Always a pleasure Huggerz Alana
 
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