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A New Sensation

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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I sense a hint
of a new sensation .
Could it be the tingle
of anticipation?
Or is it just my coffee
making conversation?
I知 actually contemplating
things to do
(sans the usual angst).
It痴 not much
I値l grant you,
but a change in attitude.
I知 not one
to turn down a gift,
such as that as laughter,
(you never know how much you値l get).
Not that I got a giggle going on
at the crack of dawn,
but I must say I feel a little funny.
I知 getting revved up
with nowhere to go.
The old man is snoozin
between me and what
I need to be doin.
So here I sit
trying to be quiet
as a silly mouse.
I guess I値l go love
on my dog.

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JerryPat2
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. . .and dogs are always there to be loved upon.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 08-07-2017 08:47 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

God bless there furry little hearts! ~L
LeeJ
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such as that as laughter,
(you never know how much you値l get).
Not that I got a giggle going on
at the crack of dawn,

Loved this....and lol, this made me feel quit happy, to diverge from the usual and read...not to mention, those great times of laughter.  Belly laughs that heal all.

Well done.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 08-07-2017 02:20 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Hey thanks LeeJ!
When it comes to laughing I do not hold back. (unless of course I'm in one of those places where it is inappropriate to laugh- then all I can do is try my best)
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quote:
I知 actually contemplating
things to do

Here's what you could do...

Ask the old man to wear earplugs and turn the music all the way up!  

Don't take me seriously. Enjoyed your poem!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Cerulean,
That's not a half bad idea....~L
Poet In Pink
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  Pssst...Pass some of that Sensation my way please!!! I could use a boost of energy!  Enjoyed   Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Pinkypssst,
Here ya go sweetie! Hugs! ~L
 
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