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A Bayou Love Song

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JerryPat2
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I ran to her
within my wanderlust
to the rhythm
of her own down and dirty
dreams are forever
sanctified with my holy heartsí beat

I sought the vision of her intuitive acuity
looking into my inner
never shuttered heartís skylight
allowing the light
to once and for all
break through so totally

my mouth slightly open
she surrendered completely
fused with my essencesí forever hug
now it was radiance
merging with joie de vivre
hearts overflowing

for once the world stood still
we breathed as one

©January 30, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton


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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


1 posted 08-06-2017 09:06 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Oh so romantic.  Really nice poem JP.
JerryPat2
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2 posted 08-06-2017 09:40 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Thank you, Blues.

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Boomer Styles
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3 posted 08-06-2017 10:01 PM       View Profile for Boomer Styles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Boomer Styles

quote:
"I sought the vision of her intuitive acuity"
This line leaped out from your poetry and snagged my attention in a most demanding way.

Very much enjoyed.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 08-06-2017 10:25 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Thank you very much Boomer.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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5 posted 08-07-2017 12:17 AM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Such a fine love song indeed ~ Much enjoyed it from beginning to end Jerry Alana
JamesMichael
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Keep this love song going...james
JerryPat2
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Ah, I thank you from the bottom of my heart, Alana, very sorry I missed your comment.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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Thanks James, for finding this poem and commenting on on it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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