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Cerulean
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0 posted 08-05-2017 02:44 PM       View Profile for Cerulean   Email Cerulean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cerulean

"Saturday"

With all the political discussion going on
Maybe itís a good idea to take the day off
Go to a nice lake and look for a swan
Write a poem on it so good you blastoff.

(I know blastoff isnít a verb and didnít feel like using ďblast offĒ. Enjoy!)
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JerryPat2
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1 posted 08-05-2017 03:34 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

"blastoff" works for me, Cerulean. It is better as one word than two seperate ones.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Marchmadness
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We all need a break sometimes, Cerulean.
Cerulean
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Marchmadness- Yes you're correct about that.
Cerulean
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Jerry- Thanks for the vote of confidence on that. It's called poetic license!
jwesley
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Yeah...
2islander2
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excellent, i feel that way so often in France too, thanks
cerulean


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jwesley and yann- you're welcome

And I hope things get better in France
Poet In Pink
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This makes me smile This is zackly why I never mix politics with poetry, family or friends ~ Love the lake ~ I do a lot of my best writing there Much enjoyed Cerulean ~ Alana
Cerulean
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I try my best to keep politics separate from poetry, family and friends too. Anyway, glad the poem made you smile. Thanks for your comment!  

Edit: forgot to mention... regarding best writing places, you make a good point. It's very important to find your ideal writing place(s) to maximize your imagination's potential. Lakes and ponds are two of the best places for writing. I've been there, done that too.

[This message has been edited by Cerulean (08-08-2017 04:17 AM).]

Namyh
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Cerulean - Saturday! Thanks for reminding me. Now I can't wait. Most enjoyed. Namyh
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You're welcome, Namyh. Have fun this Saturday. Much appreciated!  
 
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