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All Things Being Equal

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JerryPat2
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the foot of midnight
leans into the armpit of high moon
strolling, extolling and
caressing marinated fleshy mounds
sitting on the psychedelic loveseat

therefore . . . the tale is told
on goddess-sized foundations
in various stages of covering for the body
the nudes smile the smile
which say they have nothing to hide
whereas the dressed yaps a lot
trying to conceal sins hidden beneath clothing
every day or so they change places
with each other
the nudes become dressed
and the . . .
ah, but you're hip, you "get it"

I guess the old saying is right on . . .
ultimately the end justifies everything

ŠApril 9, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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A very light, enjoyable poem. Somewhat funny too. Thanks for sharing.
JerryPat2
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I appreciate your thoughts, Cerulean.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-05-2017 09:15 PM).]

2islander2
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wonderful Jerry, love is a question for me of temptation (i am getting older)

thanks


yann
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Thank you Yann, I so appreciate your thoughts.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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