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secondhanddreampoet
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There’s a Last Chance for Everything

Swirling clouds dance through the
    azure emptiness
to a soft breeze and morning song.

This verdant forest of dapple sun
holds more truth than any man
   shall ever know.

A lone heron roams an endless sky
above a lake of Summer dreams.

Deep thoughts flow here in subtle
    tides and currents
but returning always to seek
    her heart,
and one last chance for
the greatest love story
this world has ever known.

                   --- b. e. adams (8/3/2017)
                        [my birthday poem]
© Copyright 2017 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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There is alwys that "one last chance." This is absolutely one of your very best writes.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
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2 posted 08-03-2017 09:57 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

Thanks JP !
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quote:
A lone heron roams an endless sky
above a lake of Summer dreams.

Magical.

This poem is beautiful. And I wish you a happy birthday.
secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 08-03-2017 10:28 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

Thanks so much for the comment/reply pursuant to this li'l "poetic scribble" and also for the birthday wish !
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You're welcome!
Marchmadness
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Really love this one, Bruce.
secondhanddreampoet
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Thanks Ida !

[I would argue that 'the world' (especially this double-post-modern
"Runaway American Dream") needs more 'incurable Romantics?!']
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Always believe in that one last chance! Beautifully penned as always Bruce ~ Happy Belated Birthday my friend ~ Hope it was one of your best ever! Alana
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Thanks, Alana !  
 
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