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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-07-24 07:40 AM


What a noisy place the early dawn be
before the birds take to the wing
they make the trees sing
songs to bring
the light of
day.


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2017-07-24 08:13 AM


Ah, I understand this big time. I compare that time of the day to a human reunion, everyone talking at once.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2017-07-24 05:48 PM


You don't need an alarm clock if you sleep with yer window open! ~L
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
3 posted 2017-07-26 08:55 PM


yeah, GUMBO YA YA - everybody talking at once...
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2017-07-27 05:48 PM


Jimmy!
Gumbo ya ya, huh?! What a fun phrase! Thanks for commenting on this little ditty. ~L

Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2017-07-27 07:41 PM


A lovely way to awake to the chirpy chirps of happy lil' birds ~ I have a big tree and a row of bushes right outside my bedroom window ~ Much enjoyed   Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2017-07-27 09:04 PM


Pinkloaf,
I thought you might like this one. ~L

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