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What a Noisy Place

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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What a noisy place the early dawn be
before the birds take to the wing
they make the trees sing
songs to bring
the light of
day.

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Ah, I understand this big time. I compare that time of the day to a human reunion, everyone talking at once.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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You don't need an alarm clock if you sleep with yer window open! ~L
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yeah, GUMBO YA YA - everybody talking at once...
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Jimmy!
Gumbo ya ya, huh?! What a fun phrase! Thanks for commenting on this little ditty. ~L
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A lovely way to awake to the chirpy chirps of happy lil' birds ~ I have a big tree and a row of bushes right outside my bedroom window ~ Much enjoyed   Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Pinkloaf,
I thought you might like this one. ~L
 
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