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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2017-07-19 07:17 AM



It felt as if the gates of hell
had been opened.
It could have baked Alaska
It stifled us like claustrophobics.
It clung like a little black dress.
The heat was so oppressive
The UN called for sanctions
and The Donald sweated Tang.



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2017-07-19 08:09 AM


At least The Donald would be clear headed by drinking Tang. "It clung like a little black dress." . . . Perfect!

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2017-07-19 12:06 PM


"sweating Tang" still cracks me up! Of course you went for the dress, I would have put money on that one . ~L
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2017-07-19 01:41 PM


Heh.Heh

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BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2017-07-19 03:25 PM


At least he's making tang great again.  
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2017-07-19 08:46 PM


The Russians mix it with vodka! ~L
Poet In Pink
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6 posted 2017-07-27 07:48 PM


Now that's HOT!!!  You are the Mistress of Metaphors Lori Lou ~ Love the way you weave your thoughts   Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2017-07-27 09:00 PM


Pinkpearl,
I thank you kindly for the honor bestowed upon me. ~L

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