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How Hot Was It

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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It felt as if the gates of hell
had been opened.
It could have baked Alaska
It stifled us like claustrophobics.
It clung like a little black dress.
The heat was so oppressive
The UN called for sanctions
and The Donald sweated Tang.


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At least The Donald would be clear headed by drinking Tang. "It clung like a little black dress." . . . Perfect!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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"sweating Tang" still cracks me up! Of course you went for the dress, I would have put money on that one . ~L
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Heh.Heh

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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At least he's making tang great again.  
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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The Russians mix it with vodka! ~L
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Now that's HOT!!!  You are the Mistress of Metaphors Lori Lou ~ Love the way you weave your thoughts   Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Pinkpearl,
I thank you kindly for the honor bestowed upon me. ~L
 
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