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Open Poetry #50

That Day

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2017-07-16 01:16 AM

     Some Days

     some days there are tears
     others
     I am mad as hell
     on another
     I just want to forget
     but we never can
     of those we knew
     the one's dear
     the one's lost



     Helen 041857 - 071613



     a re-post, because . . .

     because on this day it always rains


     ©krawdad

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2017-07-16 06:09 AM

I was doing okay until you said it always rains on that day and you made me cry. ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-07-16 08:31 AM

Short. To the point. Absolutely cool poetry.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2017-07-17 02:56 PM

Sadly beautiful. She was one slick lady alright, and such a special poetess.

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

4 posted 2017-07-18 01:39 AM

A very touching tribute ~ Sorry for your loss ~ Alana

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2017-07-20 04:18 PM

fine writing...james

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2017-07-21 05:17 PM

She was, and my memories of her, still are, very important to me. And my heart still, as it always will, holds her close.

Jimmy

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2017-07-22 09:15 PM

So true, Crawdad.

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