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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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A flower refused
The scent is a memory
Forbidden her heart.

© Copyright 2017 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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Sad three lines, Lori. You really know how to "grab" someone with whatever style of poetry you write.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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I don't know I did the topic justice. Scent is the strongest stimulant to memory so refusing to smell a flower whose scent is connected to a love she cannot bear to think about. ~L
JerryPat2
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We always try to think we could have written a certain poem better. You did good on this one, my friend.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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Nicely penned Lori Belle ~ The message loud and clear Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Thanks Pink in Boots!
I really appreciate the feed back. ~L
JamesMichael
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nice...james
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Thanks James!! ~L
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Scents are the best but they can be the devil sometimes :/ Lovely write!

-Trina
...because the most powerful words in your life are "I might be wrong"...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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9 posted 07-23-2017 05:20 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Hey Trina!
Long time no see!
Yes, scents can be the devil, you got that right. ~L
 
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