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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2017-07-14 10:01 PM



A flower refused
The scent is a memory
Forbidden her heart.


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2017-07-15 08:43 AM


Sad three lines, Lori. You really know how to "grab" someone with whatever style of poetry you write.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2017-07-15 10:56 AM


I don't know I did the topic justice. Scent is the strongest stimulant to memory so refusing to smell a flower whose scent is connected to a love she cannot bear to think about. ~L
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2017-07-15 11:12 AM


We always try to think we could have written a certain poem better. You did good on this one, my friend.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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4 posted 2017-07-18 01:26 AM


Nicely penned Lori Belle ~ The message loud and clear Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2017-07-18 06:05 AM


Thanks Pink in Boots!
I really appreciate the feed back. ~L

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2017-07-18 09:08 PM


nice...james
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2017-07-18 09:48 PM


Thanks James!! ~L
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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8 posted 2017-07-22 10:23 PM


Scents are the best but they can be the devil sometimes :/ Lovely write!

-Trina
...because the most powerful words in your life are "I might be wrong"...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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9 posted 2017-07-23 05:20 AM


Hey Trina!
Long time no see!
Yes, scents can be the devil, you got that right. ~L

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