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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-07-10 05:07 AM



It is only a matter of hours now
until we say goodbye.
This will be our first time apart
and already the tears are flowing.
I know he is going to miss me
and wonder if I’m ever coming back.
It breaks my heart to worry him so.
I know it is only for a few days,
But how does he know that?
For all I know, he’ll think
he is back at the pound.
Bless his poor little heart.
He’ll be taking his own little bed
and his kennel so he won’t feel
so far from home.
But I’ll feel so far from him.
He won’t have anyone
to give him lovin’s and kisses,
to shake his hand
and give him treats.
Who is going to chase him
around the coffee table
and play hide and seek?
Who is going to comfort him
if there is a thunder storm?
Oh I know he’ll be better off there
than with us.
He goes nuts when we leave him in the car,
or a motel room or the RV.
I’m a big blubbering mess
that is beginning to think
this is going to be easier on him than me.



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2017-07-10 08:05 AM


I am guessing you are sending him  the vet. We do worry about our pets. It'll be over soon.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2017-07-10 08:36 AM


Yes he is going to the vet. He is used to going to the vet (not this one) to get groomed so he doesn't have "vet anxiety". I know it won't be for that long. It just hit me yesterday how much emotion I have tied up in this dog. It is like he has become my emotional support dog. Anyway, the powerful feelings caught me off guard and spawned a poem. ~L
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2017-07-10 09:03 AM


I enjoyed your poem, you feel the same as I do about my furry creature.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2017-07-10 08:51 PM


"this is going to be easier on him than me."...some things seem that way...james
Poet In Pink
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MI
5 posted 2017-07-18 12:13 PM


Oh Lori Lou I can so relate with you on this one!!! There have been a few times I have had to leave my dog Bella behind ~ You are right on the money when you say it is harder on US then them   Hope all went well ~ Alana
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