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AngelofLight
Junior Member
Posts 14
Florida,USA

0 posted 2017-07-08 11:04 PM



We gaze into each
others eyes for a moment
In that moment
we see the love
we have for each other

We close the gap
still gazing into
each others hearts
We can hear our
hearts beating faster
and faster

We stand in front
of each other now
I feel his fingers
caress my cheek
as his face moves
closer to mine

I feel his lips
brush against mine
They start off as
light kisses but
as time passes
they grow to be
more passionate

I feel his arms go
around my waist
as he continues
to kiss me
so passionately

His hands keep
dropping lower and lower
I know where this
is all heading
because I see the
love in his eyes

We are fixing to lose
all control
But I do not care
because I love him so
My one and only

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2017-07-09 10:46 AM


Slow motion revving up to uncontrollable passion. Love this.

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2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2017-07-09 08:26 PM


a very nice declaration, love in every line, sweet to read
yann

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