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Poet In Pink
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Flowers wake up beneath morn's dew
Stretching upward to skies of blue
All things look beautiful and new
A lovely view, a lovely view

Bright red robins sing a sweet tune
As they bask in the warmth of June
Across the lake from the lagoon
Comes cry of loon, comes cry of loon

Butterflies frolic amongst the trees
Playing hide and seek with the bees
They both take flight with such quick ease
Riding the breeze, riding the breeze

Beauty of nature doth abound
All we need do is look around
So many wonders to be found
It does astound, It does astound

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You have given us nature in our own back yard, Alana. The morn's dew, the beautiful robin gave me visions of growing up in southern Arkansas. Beautiful images all the way through this one.

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Pinktunia,
Very nicely done! Your rhymes flowed with ease and you painted a lovely picture of summer! ~L
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wonderful, nature has a such convincing beauty


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Thankies Jerry I'm glad this stirred up some good memories for you ~ Alana
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Thank you Lori-Lei You always say the sweetest thangs!  Pinktunia
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I agree Yann     Thank you for stopping by to read ~ Alana
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Your poetry reads like a breath of fresh air, literally.
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Thank you so much Blues Glad you enjoyed ~ Alana
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Wow. Just wow.

When I was a child, I used to have visions of nature similar to this. Something so simple. So elegant. Except my visions were usually that of in a primitive forest on a bright day. Seeing the shadows of the leaves of trees. Seeing the crisp, clear creek. Delighting in the small sunrays that go through the branches of trees.

Very simple. Like that. I also like how you repeat phrases in the last line of each stanza. It has a mesmerizing effect. I used to do that with a couple of my poems a long time ago, back when I could write way better than I do now. I've said enough for now, but thank you for sharing!
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Thank you so much for the read and sharing your love for nature too. After reading your reply I meshed our thoughts together and wrote Woodland Wonders ~ I'll post it soon and hope you enjoy ~ Thanks for inspiring it Alana
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You're welcome and I look forward to your poem "Woodland Wonders". I'll keep an eye out for it. Thanks!
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Butterflies frolic amongst the trees
Playing hide and seek with the bees
They both take flight with such quick ease
Riding the breeze, riding the breeze

smiles and hugs
Lee J.
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Nicely done, Pink.

The repetition draws in to a form of a chant, which results in a meditative state in awe of the Nature's beauty.

CG
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Ah, certainly brings out natures wonders . . .
nicely written...

j.
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wonderful...I like how you used each of the last lines twice...james
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Thank you for the read Lee Appreciate you ~ Glad you enjoyed ~ Huggerz Alana
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Hello CG   Thankies for the read ~ Always nice to hear from you ~ Alana
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Thank you kindly for stopping by Jimmy   Alana
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Thank you so much James Glad you enjoyed ~ Alana
 
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