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This Here Willow
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This Here Willow |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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I’ll lay me down in a field of clover. I’ll weave a cover from the flowers, use my hound dog for a pillow. I’ll watch the clouds go by and dream of you from underneath this here willow. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This Here Willow (sorry my friend - couldn't resist...) "I’ll lay me down in a field of clover. I’ll weave a cover from the flowers, use my hound dog for a pillow. I’ll watch the clouds go by and dream of you from underneath this here willow." And I, alive with the skies, the land , the animals, will unknowingly come upon you, and we, as one, shall commune with nature in a way free . . . from all but the presence of God. Very nice piece, my friend... much enjoyed, j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Way cool Jimmy! I thought my version needed a little something more. Apparently I was right! Thank you! ~L |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
nice ! Clouds seem to be self-fluffing ... but, can you 'fluff' the dog like a pillow?! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Just depends on what you feed the dog...lol! ~L |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Lori Boo what a cute lil picture you painted ~ Fluffing the dog for a pillow made me giggle  Luv this!!! Alana |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Pinknu, I missed your comment! I'm glad you had as much fun reading as I had writing. ~L |
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