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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2017-06-30 08:07 AM





The wind makes music
The grasses dance together
Trees nod approval


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Poet In Pink
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1 posted 2017-06-30 02:07 PM


You've got me dancing along too as I read ~ A lively image you have painted Lori Belle   Enjoyed!  Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2017-06-30 02:38 PM


Pinkypetal,
Thanky for commenting on my little Haiku. It came to me  on my walk this morning. ~L

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2017-07-01 05:12 PM


You capture so much with so few words and wistful visuals.  

Good on ya Lori.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2017-07-01 06:23 PM


Thank you Blues!
Yes haikus are skimpy little devils. They are the bikini of the poetry world. The only bikini I can do justice to at this point in my life. Thank you for your kind words. ~L

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2017-07-02 11:31 AM


Bikinis were created for one purpose: to expose more skin. Based upon that, so many bikinis are so under-used by their wearers that the money spent on them was all but wasted.  I've seen so many ladies in bikinis  Living up to the purpose of bikinis that it's a wonder that so much sunburn at one time isn't hazardous to the individual.

Again,  Bikinis were created for one purpose: to expose more skin, and I for one, if I wore them, would be among the top candidates in a bikini wearing contest.

So There!!

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2017-07-02 08:05 PM


Jimmy,
My friend, I'll have you know your comment had me blinking and blankly staring at my computer as the vision of you in a bright red bikini burned into my mind. I'll never be able to unsee that, never. I don't know how to thank you, I really don't. ~L

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2017-07-03 08:34 PM


enjoyed...james
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