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Poet In Pink
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When you gaze upon a rainbow remember this my friend
I'm gazing at it also I'm at the other end
When the moonlight dances across your bedroom floor
Know I'm thinking of you of this you can be sure

When you view the twinkling stars on a warm summers night
Know I will see them too and think of you with much delight
When you hear the whispers of the wind singing in your ear
Recall fond memories of me and know that I am near

When the fragrant scent of flowers comes wafting into a room
May it stir your senses and remind you of my perfume
As you're sitting quietly pondering over the end of day
Know that I am with you there just a memory away

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1 posted 06-25-2017 11:27 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

grand-fine Romanticism !

YOU ... have a lovely 'spirit-heart' [as my 'native' (true) American brothers and sisters would put it]
JerryPat2
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Magical words and rhyme which capture and give this poem a lasting memory, Alana.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Pinkelywink,
This is sweet! The rhymes flow like silk. The poem leaves the reader feeling like you have left much more than just a memory. ~L
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4 posted 06-27-2017 09:21 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovely...james
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5 posted 06-28-2017 09:08 AM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

You have such a gift for rhyme, meter and your poems have such a romantic lift to them.

And I'll say to someone that I now can remember fondly of: "When you look at the moon on a clear night, think that I too am looking at it. Hold that thought, and it will bring back the good memories."
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6 posted 06-30-2017 02:29 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Thank you so much Bruce for your kind words and the lovely compliment ~ I am honored ~ Alana
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Thank you Jerry ~ A poet can't ask for anything more than to be remembered ~ Your kind words gift a smile Alana
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Thank you for your sweet reply Lori Lou ~ Your kind words mean much ~ Pinkelywink
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Thank you for taking the time to read James and for your kind reply Alana
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Thank you for your sweet lovely reply JJ You always say the nicest things ~ Alana
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thanks alana, in that way we are never alone, and beauty is a gift delivered, such a sweet poem


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Alana - When walking through the thick green foliage of a Borneo jungle in noonday heat on a Tuesday, I felt a rare twinge of "pinklishness" prodding my right side and summoning me to return and reply to a wonderful poetic work by Her Highness of Hugz, the Goddess of Muchers, the Princess of Pink. So here I am and kinda glad it was not "Just a memory." Good to hear from the one and only.....Alana. Most enjoyed. Namyh
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Thank you dear Yann for your heartfelt reply ~ Your comments always leave me smiling Alana
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Dear Namyh so happy to hear from you my friend!!!  Hope life has been kind to you ~ Thank you for the read and your awesome comment So nice to see you! Huggerz Alana
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Lovely writing, Pink.
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This is sweet. Enjoyed.

-Trina
...because the most powerful words in your life are "I might be wrong"...

LeeJ
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bittersweet reminder of belief of love, which is every where.

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Alana- Beautifully written. It's very comforting to read. Anyone can read this if they have lost someone close in their life. You have a real talent for this kind of writing, and it's obvious by how many people are praising your writing abiilty. Keep up the good work.
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Speaking of dementia, I have had it for a few years, mine is affecting my memory pretty bad. Speaking of memory loss, I have misplaced the other "Quintessence" poems. I'll keep looking for them.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Pleased to meet you Marchmadness I appreciate you taking the time to read, and I Thank You for your kind words ~ Alana
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Pleased to meet you Trina Happy to hear you enjoyed ~ Alana
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Thank you for dropping in to read Lee and your words are so true Alana
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Thank you so much Cerulean Your kind words gift me a smile   Alana
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Just finding your reply now Jerry....I see you found it!!!  I'm off to read     Alana
 
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