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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2017-06-24 11:07 AM


santa2


Santa
It's past midnight
your reindeers are waiting
you promised I can ride with you
bring gifts to kids around
leave smiles with them
miss you.

I think
I'll close my eyes
dream you sit on snow clouds
getting ready for your sleigh drive
through a swirl of frost ice
wake me up, please
let's go


@jjote 06/24/2017

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2017-06-24 11:20 AM


Hey JJ! Nice bit of chill in a heat wave. I really enjoyed it. ~L
Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
2 posted 2017-06-24 08:15 PM


JJ how sweet is this!!! Such a cute pic   Much enjoyed ~ Alana
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2017-06-24 10:16 PM


Beautiful, my friend.

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2017-06-25 05:36 PM


just wonderful, like a child dream


yann



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2017-06-27 09:24 PM


enjoyed reading this...Santa is only about 6 months away...james
jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2017-06-28 08:40 AM


Thanks all for reading my child poems. I did not think anyone would be that appreciative of such genre.

But right now I can't seem to find the inspiration to write any other kind so it was really nice to read your comments.

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