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jjote
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0 posted 06-24-2017 11:07 AM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jjote

santa2


Santa
It's past midnight
your reindeers are waiting
you promised I can ride with you
bring gifts to kids around
leave smiles with them
miss you.

I think
I'll close my eyes
dream you sit on snow clouds
getting ready for your sleigh drive
through a swirl of frost ice
wake me up, please
let's go


@jjote 06/24/2017
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 06-24-2017 11:20 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Hey JJ! Nice bit of chill in a heat wave. I really enjoyed it. ~L
Poet In Pink
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JJ how sweet is this!!! Such a cute pic   Much enjoyed ~ Alana
jwesley
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3 posted 06-24-2017 10:16 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Beautiful, my friend.

j.
2islander2
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4 posted 06-25-2017 05:36 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

just wonderful, like a child dream


yann


JamesMichael
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5 posted 06-27-2017 09:24 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

enjoyed reading this...Santa is only about 6 months away...james
jjote
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6 posted 06-28-2017 08:40 AM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

Thanks all for reading my child poems. I did not think anyone would be that appreciative of such genre.

But right now I can't seem to find the inspiration to write any other kind so it was really nice to read your comments.
 
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