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Poet In Pink
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A pomegranate sunset
Sashays its way
Across cinnamon shaded sands
Of the sleepy~eyed desert

Off in the distance
Playful little dirt~devils
Swirl and twirl haphazardly
As they engage in a game of tag

Magenta flowering cacti
Heave a big sigh of relief
Happily welcoming a reprieve
From the suns scorching rays

Small colorful critters
Venture out of hidey holes
Scurrying and slithering about
In search of evenings pot~luck

A gentle zephyr
Lollygags across the plain
Singing a soothing lullaby
In wait of the moons embracing luminance

A
Desert
Dusk
To
Remember

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 06-23-2017 05:55 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Pinkapalooza,
That was beautiful! I could still feel the heat off the sands! Your palate of desert colors was spot on. ~L
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 06-23-2017 06:36 AM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

fine imagery (both 'poetic' and photographic)

wish I could be 'free' like those 'dirt devils!'
JerryPat2
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3 posted 06-23-2017 09:00 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

When you write a poem, Poet, you put your whole being into it. And the reader can see that in each and every line, Great composition!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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4 posted 06-24-2017 10:35 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

exquisite dusk, very nice poetical sensations of the universe


yann
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Thankies Lori Belle   Hope you didn't get heat - stroke out there!  lol Glad you enjoyed ~ Alana
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Hello Bruce   Thanks for reading and leaving such kind words ~ I'm with you on the free as dirt-devils!!!  ~ Alana
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Thank you so much for the more than kind reply ~ You really made my day Jerry Alana
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Thank you Yann for the lovely comment ~ Always appreciate you reading   Alana
BluesSerenade
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9 posted 06-24-2017 11:27 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

You paint the most picture perfect poetic sunset.  Absolutely gorgeous!!  
jwesley
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Well done , my friend . . . felt it in your words and in the picture.

j.
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Hello BluesSerenade So nice to hear from you ~ Thank you for the lovely comment ~ So glad you liked your read ~ Alana
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Thank you so much J Appreciate you reading ~ Alana
 
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