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When I Recall Her

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JamesMichael
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When I Recall Her

"It still hurts me, when I miss
the good things about her."

I could think about my honey
for the rest of my life,
although I know my past is not my life;
yet it is an accumulated part of my life
and over all it is a beautiful chapter
that I lived in my past.
Yes, my life is right now,
No, it is not my past,
Yet, when I think of the good times
me and my sweetheart shared
I loved them so much
and then I realize
how much I miss her personality
and those good thoughts
can rapidly turn to bad,
Yes it does tend to hurt
when I miss the good things about her
and it makes me feel sad
when at those times
I recall her.

JamesLee
for Suzie
6/22/17

Different Drum
sung by Linda Ronstadt
written by Mike Nesmith

"You and I travel to the beat
of a different drum
Ah can't you tell
by the way I run
Every time you make eyes at me."


  


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So tenderly expressed James ~ It is hard looking back and feeling things in our life that have passed ~ I believe it is good to sometimes visit ~ as long as we don't want to stay there and forget about living and finding new happiness Thank you for sharing ~ Alana
JerryPat2
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I think most of us have the "recall" of lost loves. Cool poem, James.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Nice one James! ~L
jwesley
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4 posted 06-23-2017 05:35 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Introspective and lonely, my friend. Phrased just right.  - - - well done!!!

much enjoyed

j.
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and those good thoughts
can rapidly turn to bad,
Yes it does tend to hurt
when I miss the good things about her

rich introspection


yann

JamesMichael
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Thank you Poet in Pink, Jerry,, Lori, jwesley and 2islander2 for the nice responses...james
 
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