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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2017-06-22 10:30 PM

When I Recall Her

"It still hurts me, when I miss
the good things about her."

I could think about my honey
for the rest of my life,
although I know my past is not my life;
yet it is an accumulated part of my life
and over all it is a beautiful chapter
that I lived in my past.
Yes, my life is right now,
No, it is not my past,
Yet, when I think of the good times
me and my sweetheart shared
I loved them so much
and then I realize
how much I miss her personality
and those good thoughts
can rapidly turn to bad,
Yes it does tend to hurt
when I miss the good things about her
and it makes me feel sad
when at those times
I recall her.

JamesLee
for Suzie
6/22/17

Different Drum
sung by Linda Ronstadt
written by Mike Nesmith

"You and I travel to the beat
of a different drum
Ah can't you tell
by the way I run
Every time you make eyes at me."

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

1 posted 2017-06-22 10:47 PM

So tenderly expressed James ~ It is hard looking back and feeling things in our life that have passed ~ I believe it is good to sometimes visit ~ as long as we don't want to stay there and forget about living and finding new happiness Thank you for sharing ~ Alana

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-06-22 11:12 PM

I think most of us have the "recall" of lost loves. Cool poem, James.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2017-06-23 05:57 AM

Nice one James! ~L

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2017-06-23 05:35 PM

Introspective and lonely, my friend. Phrased just right. - - - well done!!!

much enjoyed

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2017-06-24 10:36 AM

and those good thoughts
can rapidly turn to bad,
Yes it does tend to hurt
when I miss the good things about her

rich introspection

yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2017-07-03 08:32 PM

Thank you Poet in Pink, Jerry,, Lori, jwesley and 2islander2 for the nice responses...james

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