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Second Hand Sky
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Second Hand Sky |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Second Hand Sky I am a thrift store poet with second hand sky blue eyes I leave a song in your pocket and I let all your caged birds fly I waltz down a street of dreams wearing a second hand sky disguise love is never quite as it seems still I know a hopeful sun will rise I believe the promise of you even if everything turns out to be a lie I will believe I will believe in the promise of you underneath a second hand sky blue underneath a second hand sky blue sky I'm a restless soul drifter singing second hand sky blues my heart's a hapless shapeshifter and my head's just second hand news I believe the promise of love and even if every rose may die on the vine I will believe I'll be your relief the sweet promise of love fly the second hand sky like a dove fly the second hand sky until love shines I am a thrift store poet I waltz down a street of dreams and oh I believe the promise of you even if everything turns out to be a lie I will believe I will believe in the promise of you underneath a second hand sky blue underneath a second hand sky blue sky The sweet promise of love fly the second hand sky like a dove fly the second hand sky until love shines I believe the promise of you and even if every rose must die on the vine still I'll believe I'll be your relief underneath a second hand sky blue underneath a second hand sky blue sky underneath a second hand sky I believe in you "Whatever makes you weird is probably your greatest asset"-Joss Whedon |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
My kind of writing, soul drifter. I admire your attitude, your persona, and most of all the expert posting of your lines. GREAT write! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello SD  Another wonderful write ~ I always enjoy seeing a new poem posted from you ~ TGIF!! Alana |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Feels like your poem matches your name..I sense a kind of desperate or (hopeless?) longing unfulfilled. I hope I have interpreted this right |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sounds like this poem is in desperate need of a guitar. Sounded like a great song to me. ~L |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Only you soul drifter. Honestly, you and your poetry are a joy... |
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