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Losing Suzette

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JamesMichael
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Losing Suzette


Melinda knew how to play a piano
better than any woman I had ever met,
I loved listening to her play for hours
that is until I met  Suzette,
I found myself saying "Suzy I love you"
every time she played her violin,
she was the sweetest thing
a man could want for a friend;
until one day we became more than friends,
that remains a day I will always regret
it was the day my suffering began,
that was the day I lost Suzette.


JamesLee
6/13/17


"Melinda was mine
'til the time that I found her
holding Jim, loving him
then Sue came along,
loved me strong
that's what I thought,
Me and Sue,
but that died too."

Solitary Man...Neil Diamond
  

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Nice James! ~L
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Hello James You've penned your emotions so tenderly in this piece. Enjoyed reading ~ Alana
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Thank you Lori and Poet in Pink for responding...james
 
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