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Five Angels in a Row

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soul drifter
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Colorado


0 posted 06-13-2017 07:32 PM       View Profile for soul drifter   Email soul drifter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for soul drifter

The amazing true story of the five women that I fell in love with, from age 13 to, just a few years ago, age 34. Enjoy.
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Five Angels in a Row

Stephanie,
in memory green
no matter how many years pass
your brown eyes unveil in me
sweetest scents of the past

Jennifer,
I'll always remember
that night when I turned eighteen
we explored each other
ah, young love is a beautiful thing

Beth Ann,
you spirit always ran
like wildfire in my bones
someday I will understand
the light your heart always shone

Sarah,
were you aware of
my deep secret desire
your smile bright as the sun
fueled my creativity fire

Aryana,
are you gonna
be the one true love for me
at the end of the day honey
your eyes are all I want to see

Five angels,
five gorgeous women
all in a row
all have left a mark forever on this man
and I'm grateful I got to know
the soft lightness of love in brilliant hues
shining inside my heart for each and every one of you
and I'll carry it on
until my dying day
yeah I'll sing to you in song
until my dying day

"Whatever makes you weird is probably your greatest asset"-Joss Whedon

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 06-13-2017 08:54 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Sweet! Sweet!! SWEET!!!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

miscellanea
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OH


2 posted 06-13-2017 09:23 PM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

I agree.  Love this, love this.
Really liked "the soft lightness of love"
          ~miscellanea
I believe your poem can be an inspiration to springboard many more. Bring them on.

      ~miscellanea`
JamesMichael
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3 posted 06-13-2017 09:52 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

very nice...james
Poet In Pink
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4 posted 06-13-2017 11:03 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Great tribute to each one SD Sounds like your life was richer for knowing each of them ~ Enjoyed ~ Alana
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