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jjote
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Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2017-06-12 10:02 PM


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Gazing
in rapt wonder
child lost in magic land
embarks an awesome fancy flight
watch sea creatures leap out
into her world
they play.


@jjote 06/13/2017

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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2017-06-12 10:21 PM


magical in fact, love that


yann

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2017-06-12 11:15 PM


Magical indeed.
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2017-06-13 09:53 PM


looks like fun...james
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2017-06-13 10:05 PM


I have nothing but constructive praise in regards to this one. Children. Imagination. Excellent!

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Poet In Pink
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MI
5 posted 2017-06-13 10:42 PM


JJ this is so delightful ~ Cute pic to enhance your words ~ Much enjoyed! Alana
jjote
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Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2017-06-14 09:56 AM


When my poetic well gets dry, I get inspired looking at my grandkid photos. Thanks all for your encouraging comments
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