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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2017-06-06 02:49 PM


   Love and Wilderness

Beneath a deep infinity
of white clouds floating
forever in an azure sea,
amid these mist-wrapped
spectral rocks and trees
on this fine late Spring day,
there is only peace, serenity
joy, and freedom in a fine
elixir of timelessness.
Here in the wilderness,
where a thousand paths
never reach the world,
morning lingers in the pines
to dance with the dappled
sun-lit shadows, thoughts,
endless hopes, and dreams
of true and unconditional
    Love.

             --- b. e adams - (6/6/2017)



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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2017-06-06 03:50 PM


Isnt this just like a dreampoet.

Your poem suits you so well.  It should be your mantra.  

Lovely as ever!!

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
2 posted 2017-06-06 07:03 PM


Hello Bruce A most beautiful journey through your words ~ Always a pleasure to read you ~ Alana
secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2017-06-07 06:12 AM


Thanks to both of you !
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2017-06-22 03:00 PM


Your thoughts within this poem makes me step back and wonder why I not as proficient with the English language as you are. More beautiful and honest words were never written.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2017-06-22 09:11 PM


most of my poems are written in a couple of minutes ... they just sorta' "happen" ...
as if I'm somehow 'channeling' Gaia's (Nature's) own 'voice' and/or some 1500 years
of an (Celtic) ancestral 'collective consciousness' (sometimes I dream a poem and have
to get up and write it down or I can't get back to sleep) ... so, it's not like I 'plan' them
(sit down and say now I'm gonna' write about 'such and such' a topic); etc. The how and
why of it actually gets rather 'spooky' sometimes! ... I have no definite explanation (it
remains rather a mystery) even after I have written over 2,400 of them now.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2017-06-22 10:11 PM


beautiful...james
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