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Dear Sarah improved version

by Daddy Goose38

Dear Sarah:

Thank you so much for sharing with me your precious heart.
I wanted to share with you my own, but I guess it was not to be.
I longed to  be a little corner of your life ... but I guess not.
It was you who sought me out at Starbucks that other day,
and you could have chosen not to do that.
Then you didn't have to bare your soul to me by email
but did it anyway.
Every night I pray and ask the Universe
to bring you all the joy and love you both desire and deserve.
And ask that it bring me the love and joy
I so very long for for myself as well.
And know it will be so.
I know you will never see this, but perhaps another heart will,
And even let you know some Day, Sarah.
May the Universe bless and keep you
And shower you with abundance for as long as you live.
Through my tears,
Love,
Jaime

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Hello Goose pleased to meet you This really tugs at the heart~strings...It is so sad when love is not to be ~ you penned your emotions beautifully ~ Sorry to hear of your heartache ~ Alana
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Jaime,

Why not email this to her?  Your poem says she emailed you. This is very poignant.

Ali
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