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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2017-06-01 02:04 AM


Love lies as dead in the archives of mind
but a touch and it rises again
not to stand tall and proud
but to strut like a peacock and grin.

That grin comes quite naturally
to one who has won the battle
but love never fights, you know, you know,
so what is the battle it’s won?

Simply the battle to be entrenched
and though dead to still be alive
but from my human perspective
it’s an endeavour to no avail.

If I look further perhaps it can be
something to celebrate
but stuck in these times of limited view
who can attest to something unknown?

Strut as you wish and grin all you will
but a touch doesn’t last forever
so back love will go to lie as dead
and it all seems silly to me.

The meaning of silly?  Well, here we are:

“Silly did not originally refer to the absurd or ridiculous –  in fact quite the opposite.
The word derives from the old English word seely,
meaning happy, blissful, lucky or blessed.”

Helen / 1 June 2017

© Copyright 2017 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2017-06-01 07:11 AM


Oh how you make me think, wonder and ponder on this thing you call love. Loved the read!
~L

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2017-06-01 07:53 AM


Thank you, Lori.  I thought I had stopped pondering but so much so for my thoughts.
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