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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2017-05-31 10:55 PM

Four Corners Square

Three words.
Three lines,
- Love -
centered
in an empty room
four-corners square,
four bare walls,
an empty room
where love lived
and died.

Three words.
One line, centered,
- Love Died Here -

Can't fix, that kind of broken.

Boomer Styles
Member

since 2014-03-02

Posts 194
South Side Of Success

1 posted 2017-06-01 12:44 PM

No, you can't "fix that kind of broken". But you can still feel it. That's love too.
Awesome power in a few short strokes j.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2017-06-01 03:38 AM

Jimmy, you continue to remain high on my list of favorite poets anywhere. I really like your style.

A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2017-06-01 07:06 AM

I'm with the rest of the gang here-you're my favorite blah blah, say so much with so little yatta yatta...Now my own 2 cents...
There's never a dud in the bunch my friend, you always find an emotional button to push and I'm always glad to read you. ~L

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

4 posted 2017-06-01 11:56 PM

Hi J Like the way you executed the emotion throughout ~ Definitely in most cases you can't fix a love that is dead ~ Sometimes even part of you dies with it ~ Another great read ~ Alana

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2017-06-02 12:51 PM

A few words but enough to stir the reader into empathy. No, we can't fix it but we can know that love never dies but lives in the heart and mind forever. Sometimes it may seem like small compensation but perhaps we'll eventually come to know it as a blessing.

Be well.
Helen

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2017-06-02 03:39 AM

so beautiful, can't fix that too
yann

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