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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 2017-05-25 04:29 PM







My heart is like a golden harp
awaiting your gentle strumming
anxious for the sweet melody
which I know will be forthcoming

As you tenderly stroke my strings
I'll play a lyrical delight
filling your ears with whispered notes
serenading you through the night

We'll melt as one in harmony
symphonic music all night long
frollicking in synchronized beat
our love will play on loud and strong

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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1 posted 2017-05-25 04:58 PM


So beautiful Pinky, line for line, truly. When one hears the sweet strums of the harp accompanied by the gentle babbling of a brook  in the very slow rising of dawn, everything, save one, becomes a distant option. Metaphorically, it takes 'two' to places only they know.

You still exceed your poetry.  

Namaste


Just out looking for the real me...

[This message has been edited by P.U Stinkenbaum (05-26-2017 02:57 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2017-05-25 06:38 PM


Pinkalilly! You killed it! That was awesome!
I love the harp! You plucked it perfectly throughout the whole piece. ~L

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2017-05-26 07:41 PM


Is it really Gold?  James
Poet In Pink
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4 posted 2017-05-27 01:14 AM


Hello P.U. Thank you for reading and for yet another kind comment ~ Always look forward to hearing from you ~ Pinky
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5 posted 2017-05-27 01:16 AM


Hi Lori Thank you for stoppin' in for a read ~ I'm with you....I enjoy harp music too ~ Alana
Poet In Pink
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6 posted 2017-05-27 01:17 AM


Hello James Only one way to find out.... Thank you for taking the time to read ~ Alana
P.U Stinkenbaum
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7 posted 2017-05-27 04:38 AM


...as I always look forward to reading your mellifluous masterpieces Pinky.

Just out looking for the real me...

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