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The Cap'n and Me at 3 in the Morning-My Life as a Cereal Killer

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin'


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I
needed
him
to
satisfy
me
as
only
he
could
and
I
came
too
soon
to
that
place
I
prefer
to
linger
I
consumed
him
greedily
then
waited
for
him
to
do
me
like
he
does
So
I
can
go
back
to
sleep.
5/25/17


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P.U Stinkenbaum
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since 03-09-2017
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A Not So Stealthy Bomber


1 posted 05-25-2017 02:20 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

If there's one thing in this whole wild world that drives me mad more than anything Lori Rhoden...it's crunchy soundin' bedsprings! Before that it was 'tall poems', but I've since acclimated myself to the latter.

Yours was delicious! Yum!  

Just out looking for the real me...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Well Stinkmeister, how does it feel to be an inspiration? Thought I'd try my hand at a long title and a long poem combo. You made it look fun and it was! Might have to go back for seconds! ~L
Poet In Pink
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Hi Lori Nice to see you're trying the "Tall" poems too     Absolutely love this! Had me smiling from start to finish ~ Much enjoyed ~ Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 05-25-2017 04:44 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Tall poems! Okay, I got cha...see that's how rumors get started. That's I get for playing with poetry without a license. Glad you put all my 2's together and came to the right conclusions and found it funny. My daughter didn't get the connection the first time through and her first reaction was "gross".
~L
P.U Stinkenbaum
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quote:
"Well Stinkmeister, how does it feel to be an inspiration"?
Actually Lori Rhoden, I wasn't at all comfortable with it at first. But then I decided to dump the aerosol brand for a roll-on and now I feel a whole lot better. In fact, if I felt any better about it, I'd have to change my name again!

Like Pinky said, the trick is to have as many hats for the heads you have.

Just out looking for the real me...

 
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