Open Poetry #50 |
Sitting In A Mood Swing With Miranda On The Veranda |
P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
She left behind her Mozart as her smile changed and her weeping spirit echoed with the essence of violins Be nice to me youses, it's my first tall poem. Thamks! Just out looking for the real me... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Nice tall poem! I would have thought Miranda left her Benny Goodman behind but then there would not have been the violins. ~L |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Hey there Lori Rhoden! Thanks for checkin' out my first 'tall poem'! Miranda and Benny's tunes? I should have talked you sooner Miss Lori 'cause she's done run off to go 'Stompin at the Savoy'! An' I thought we was goin' out there on the verandy to do some smoochin'! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I thought maybe the swinging would go better with some Swing music. Hey, maybe she just had some hot feet and not hot lips. ~L |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
quote:Right again Miss Lori! But then that was me all over...always puttin' Miranda's foot in my mouth! Lips eh? I never thought of that! Just out looking for the real me... |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello Stinky Looks like the "Tall" poems are catching on around here lol Not to shabby for your first ~ Practice makes perfect though lol The poem itself is very touching ~ I heard the violins ~ Pinky |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Yeah Pinky, I took a chance. Sometimes it's better to 'join 'em' than to try and 'beat 'em! Your talents are second to none my pinkly purveyor of pretty poetry, so like...what else could I do? Just out looking for the real me... |
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