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Sitting In A Mood Swing With Miranda On The Veranda

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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She
left
behind
her
Mozart
as
her
smile
changed
and
her
weeping
spirit
echoed
with
the
essence
of
violins

Be nice to me youses, it's my first tall poem. Thamks!


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 05-25-2017 04:25 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Nice tall poem! I would have thought Miranda left her Benny Goodman behind but then there would not have been the violins. ~L
P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 05-25-2017 01:04 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Hey there Lori Rhoden! Thanks for checkin' out my first 'tall poem'! Miranda and Benny's tunes? I should have talked you sooner Miss Lori 'cause she's done run off to go 'Stompin at the Savoy'!

An' I thought we was goin' out there on the verandy to do some smoochin'!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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I thought maybe the swinging would go better with some Swing music. Hey, maybe she just had some hot feet and not hot lips. ~L
P.U Stinkenbaum
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4 posted 05-25-2017 02:13 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

quote:
" maybe she just had some hot feet and not hot lips"
Right again Miss Lori! But then that was me all over...always puttin' Miranda's foot in my mouth!

Lips eh?   I never thought of that!   

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Poet In Pink
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Hello Stinky Looks like the "Tall" poems are catching on around here lol  Not to shabby for your first ~ Practice makes perfect though lol  The poem itself is very touching ~ I heard the violins ~ Pinky
P.U Stinkenbaum
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6 posted 05-27-2017 04:47 AM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Yeah Pinky, I took a chance. Sometimes it's better to 'join 'em' than to try and 'beat 'em!

Your talents are second to none my pinkly purveyor of pretty poetry, so like...what else could I do?      


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