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P.U Stinkenbaum
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The sun laced window
shears the light of the moon,
placing it around your neck
like diamonds sparkling beneath our kiss

Translated ebbs with interpreted flows
creating soft wafting breezes
which sing through the lace of our lovemaking
only the quiet of this night has known

Let the night then do its will
for the morning brings no remorse
You and I lover, alone within its sphere
and the magic that is ours to share

Just out looking for the real me...

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 05-21-2017 08:16 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

how lovely and romantic, although your title is a little cumbersome for such a sweet poem.
I liked this poem very much. ~L
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 05-21-2017 10:38 AM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

Pure Romanticism most fine ! (better title perhaps?)

The night will always do as it will !
Poet In Pink
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Hello P A rather interesting title, then again you don't need me to tell you that  ha ha  That is why you chose it All that aside you have painted a romantic picture ~ No remorse on the morrow...That is always a good thing ~ Much enjoyed ~ Pinky
P.U Stinkenbaum
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4 posted 05-21-2017 03:50 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Thank you Lori Rhoden for your kind response...title not withstanding.

Just out looking for the real me...

P.U Stinkenbaum
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5 posted 05-21-2017 03:52 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Thank you too Mr. Adams! You are also a 'romantic at heart' as your own fine poetry always exhibits.

Just out looking for the real me...

P.U Stinkenbaum
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6 posted 05-21-2017 03:58 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Hey you Pinky! Nothing gets past you, does it?
quote:
"A rather interesting title, then again you don't need me to tell you that  ha ha  That is why you chose it"
Your comments and 'insights' are much appreciated. Let's keep it our own little "Victoria's Secret"...shall we?  

  


Just out looking for the real me...
 
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