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secondhanddreampoet
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   A Frozen Moment

Just before the vast-
immortal dawn,
when the world is
still painted in
perfect moonlight
and brushed by
the gentle kiss of a
soft Spring breeze,
if I was Time’s master
I would freeze that
mystic moment
  forever
in eternal tribute  
to the dream of a
Love that would
  never fade.

          --- b. e. adams (5/21/2017)

© Copyright 2017 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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quote:
"Just before the vast-
immortal dawn,
when the world is
still painted in
perfect moonlight
and brushed by
the gentle kiss of a
soft Spring breeze"
Now this, Mr. Adams is poetry at it's finest. Airy and visible.

Just out looking for the real me...

secondhanddreampoet
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Thank you for commenting on this l'il "poetic scribble" (and you an call me Bruce) ...
jwesley
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Very nice my friend, as usual.

j.
secondhanddreampoet
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Thanks, "J.!"
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Hello Bruce So very beautiful are your words ~ Sounds like the perfect moment to freeze in time ~ Much enjoyed ~ Alana
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Thank you, Alana !
 
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