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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 2017-05-19 09:56 PM






Hanging by a heart~string
waiting on your sweet love
looking to the heavens
I send a wish above

I glimpse a shooting star
thinking its a good sign
cherishing the daydream
of when you will be mine

I dangle in the dark
with thoughts of only you
I long to hold you close
to share my love so true

I dance upon moonbeams
my crave fills the night sky
I promise heart and soul
Until the day I die

Hanging by a heart~string
waiting on your sweet love
looking to the heavens
I send a wish above

© Poet In Pink

[This message has been edited by Poet In Pink (05-20-2017 04:07 PM).]

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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1 posted 2017-05-19 11:43 PM


You play your tune of love note for note without missing a beat Pinky. A sirens song could be no more alluring.

Beautiful in it's patience. May your wishes come true.

Just out looking for the real me...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2017-05-20 07:53 AM


Another great love poem ya got there missy.
It flows like pink silk. Takes me back to younger days of yearning. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2017-05-20 11:41 AM


Satisfy your longings (within your own moral guidelines), because they grow shorter with each passing day.

Lovely poetry Miss Alana.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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4 posted 2017-05-20 12:49 PM


Hello P.U Thank you for dropping by for a read ~ Your kind words make me smile Pinky
Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2017-05-20 12:51 PM


Hi Lori Appreciate you reading and leaving behind a nice reply. Alana
Poet In Pink
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6 posted 2017-05-20 12:54 PM


Hello Shirley Thank you for reading ~ Appreciate your reply ~ Alana
secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2017-05-21 10:42 AM


Alana ...

pleasant Romanticism ... fine visual image (I especially like that starry-eyed bird!). -- Bruce


jwesley
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8 posted 2017-05-21 11:00 AM


Have to agree with all the above, my friend...

lovely piece

j.

Poet In Pink
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9 posted 2017-05-21 03:05 PM


Hello Bruce I thank you for the read and your kind reply ~ Alana
Poet In Pink
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10 posted 2017-05-21 03:06 PM


Hello J Thanks for peeking in on my poem ~ Appreciate your reply ~ Alana
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