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Criisin' the Bamboo Forest

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JamesMichael
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Cruisin' the Bamboo Forest


"She knew how to get me back."

Back to the bamboo forest
sensing a fresh adventure in the air;
I crave the mystery
I need the peace and quiet
I love the intimacy two can share,
the lady in white
told me she would meet me their.


JamesLee
5/18/17
    

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The everso enigmatic "Lady in White". I thought I saw her once James, in another island thereabouts, but it was only the rice wine and a flimsy black dress. One had me in it's grip while the other slipped away.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Nice!, James ~L
2islander2
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i can "guess" the ending, wonderful

yann
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Hello James Beware the wiles of the lady in white ~ A delightful read ~ Alana
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far as I'm concerned --- doesn't even need "white" - or anything at all...

enjoyed


j.
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Thank you Bluesy, Lori, 2islander2, Poet in Pink and jwesley for the nice response...james
 
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