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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2017-05-18 07:20 PM




Cruisin' the Bamboo Forest


"She knew how to get me back."

Back to the bamboo forest
sensing a fresh adventure in the air;
I crave the mystery
I need the peace and quiet
I love the intimacy two can share,
the lady in white
told me she would meet me their.


JamesLee
5/18/17
    


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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-05-18 07:55 PM


The everso enigmatic "Lady in White". I thought I saw her once James, in another island thereabouts, but it was only the rice wine and a flimsy black dress. One had me in it's grip while the other slipped away.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2017-05-18 10:06 PM


Nice!, James ~L
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2017-05-18 10:10 PM


i can "guess" the ending, wonderful

yann

Poet In Pink
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4 posted 2017-05-19 12:29 PM


Hello James Beware the wiles of the lady in white ~ A delightful read ~ Alana
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2017-05-19 06:48 PM


far as I'm concerned --- doesn't even need "white" - or anything at all...

enjoyed


j.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2017-05-23 08:50 PM


Thank you Bluesy, Lori, 2islander2, Poet in Pink and jwesley for the nice response...james
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