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Take Flight
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Take Flight |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI 
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 I want to be your butterfly please unfurl me from my cocoon tenderly release my passion beneath the light of summers moon Loose my spirit send it soaring watch as my wings fly ever free wrap me up within your heart~strings bequeath your precious love to me Journey with me to loves pure bliss laying aside all of our pain lets venture into happiness it's time to leave behind the rain Fill my soul with your sweet essence on the painted wings of morrow let us join together as one casting away all our sorrow Do you dare take up wings and fly do you favor a brand new start if the answer is truly yes then simply take flight with my heart © Poet In Pink [This message has been edited by Poet In Pink (05-18-2017 11:26 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
wonderful display of talent...james |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Warm, tender and romantic. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm with him, "warm, tender and romantic" and I must add, positively pink! First time I ever read a poem that felt pink. More than ink deep. ~L |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
wonderful words, like a "spring tune", and life "rebounds" yann |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for the read James  Appreciate your kind words ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for dropping by Bluesy Appreciate your kind comment ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you Lori for the sweet comment That is the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you kindly Yann for the read & kind reply |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Glad I took flight over to your post of pink. Your poem moves me with momentum and makes me feel like I am taking flight, a romantic carpet-ride-like-flight. Nice job. Your rhyme scheme seemed effortless, too. Much enjoyed! ~misc~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
BTW, great first post! Welcome! ~misc ` |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I don't believe I've ever seen Pink look more beautiful, my friend - everything within this piece was in perfect Hue. Much enjoyed, j. |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Greetings and welcome to pip! Great writing here, a wonderful natural flow of words, it all comes together beautifully. Looking forward to more from you in the future. "Whatever makes you weird is probably your greatest asset"-Joss Whedon |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you Misc for the welcome and your kind words ~ Much appreciate you taking the time to read ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you James ever so much for your sweet comment ~ Appreciate your time Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you kindly Soul Drifter Appreciate the welcome and nice comments ~ Alana |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
An lovely invitation in each stanza. I accept. What must I do from here Pinkie, start flapping my wings?  Just out looking for the real me... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Pink... Tender thoughts. Enjoyed...Paul |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
So kind of you to stop by Stinkie Your reply has me giggling like a school girl lol Nice to know you are all fired up about accepting...But one never rushes into these things ~ After all I don't even know you yet! lol I suppose you could start by standing on one foot and flapping Thanks for your fun response ~ Pinkie |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Pleased to meet you Paul Thank you for dropping by to read & your kind comment ~ Alana |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
finely pure Romanticism ! |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for stopping in to read Dream Poet Alana |
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backstreetdreamer Junior Member Posts 18 |
You are indeed my poet in pink from PC, and your poetry is as lovely as ever...Keith. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello dear Keith I Thank you for the read and kind words ~ I look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry ~ Alana |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Beautiful, dreamy, romantic. Had to bring it back up. CG |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello CastleGuard pleased to meet you I thank you for your taking the time to read and for your more than kind comments ~ Thank you for the gift of a smile Alana |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a delight this is! Beautiful write and perfect picture. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello Suthern Nice to hear from you ~ Thank you for your kind reply & happy you enjoyed ~ Alana |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
The journey of a butterfly is always an interesting one 😊 Lovely write ❤ Welcome to PIP! -Trina |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello Trina Thank you for your lovely reply and welcome ~ Alana |
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