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secondhanddreampoet
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    Endless Sorrows

High fragile clouds dance
with an enigmatic moon.
The night wind sings
its most plaintiff song
through dead trees
along this forgotten
path to nowhere.
Like a shooting star
gone without a trace
she has left a dark
world without flavor
where shadows walk
the empty midnight
streets of forlorn hopes
and endless sorrows.

           --- b. e. adams (5/13/2017)


© Copyright 2017 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
P.U Stinkenbaum
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quote:
"The night wind sings
its most plaintiff song
through dead trees
along this forgotten
path to nowhere"
Most profound writing Mr. Adams. The poem overall does indeed speak with sorrows everso gently and honestly.

Just out looking for the real me...

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Cool poem . . . You had you way with it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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thanks to both of you for commenting on this li'l "poetic scribble" !
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Very beautiful expression of your love, Bruce and most worthy of K.  I think of her often too.
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My own sorrow is so raw - but I think this might have left me in tears no matter what. It's that beautiful - and that true.
secondhanddreampoet
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thanks to both of you for your comments ! ...

'Kacy' (Kathleen) Stafford was one of the grand-fine loveliest human beings
that ever graced this sad 'ol world, and these fine blue sands of "P.I.P.-land"
by the cyber sea, with her all-too-brief presence.
 
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