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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2017-05-10 02:53 PM


I hear the echo
of your voice across the vast landscape
two shadows poised to meet
you whisper in my ear
remember when
and
did we do that
I feel the slightest touch upon my cheek
your tongue ever so wet
we are apart
but . . .
distance is null and void
when imagination and fantasy are at work
tonight we might chat
you said
keep your fingers crossed
I do
never mind
we have an echo a-stirring
all these miles
between us and our desire
our shadows interact
thought process's at work
I feel your lips
upon my own, nectar from your mouth
unto me
you lift back your head
my tongue finds your throat
and has it way there
working my way to your favorite spot
we know where, don't we
the night is young

©April 3 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-11-2017 01:32 PM).]

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans
1 posted 2017-05-10 08:59 PM


quote:
"distance is null and void
when imagination and fantasy are at work"
I know this to be true.

It's a good fit in your poetry Mr. Bolton.

Just out looking for the real me...

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2017-05-10 09:36 PM


Absolutely! I know that's a fact PU, no doubt about it. Thanks for checking me out.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2017-05-11 08:39 AM


for an old geezer you write some pretty hot stuff ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2017-05-11 08:50 AM


Thank you Lori, for your comments.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~


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