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effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
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At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2017-05-07 08:58 AM



I believe I'm right where I'm supposed to be
Dealing with what Fate gave to me

As I look back at my past Life
And the Chaos and Carnage left in my wake

All of which came with a heavy cost
A Daughter, Son and Wife were lost

Yes, I am the author and I own the copyright to all of my mistakes


"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

© Copyright 2017 John Lawrence - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2017-05-07 01:50 PM


Very well said, effjayel. I could red this poem word for word and believe I had written it for me. VERY deep thinking.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2017-05-07 02:48 PM


Thank you Jerry, appreciate your input my friend

Jack

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2017-05-07 05:51 PM


I believe at some point all of us carry that burden, my friend, but you expressed it so well, all we need do is quote you to make our errors clear to others...

Well done!

jimmy

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
4 posted 2017-05-08 04:57 AM


Yes Jimmy , we all have our baggage and I thank you for your input. Wise words my friend
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