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JerryPat2
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Where you cognizant that you loved me,
And of your love was I aware?
Young love can happen when you're old,
Consume you like purified air.

Destiny, like wind to your back,
Pushes you onward, n'er to end.
Once in a while I see you pass,
I've kept your secret my good friend.

ŠApril 21, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2017 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
P.U Stinkenbaum
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quote:
"Young love can happen when you're old,
Consume you like purified air"
To this I commend with a resounding, "Yes"!

Does it ever! Well said, well written. "Secrets" Mr. Bolton? My lips are sealed!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JerryPat2
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Thanks, PU, appreciate your comments. Lips sealed? No problem there. Just a ramblin' kind of poem. Sssh!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Jerry,
Another one of your wonderful love poems. You have a knack. ~L
JerryPat2
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Thank you very much, Lori. Eh . . . some you win, some you lose. Thanks again.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

latearrival
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Jerry, young love is overated. True love comes with experience and deeper feelings. Both are welcome but I like the love that comes from deep within the heart. nice to see you writing. latearrival (jo)
JerryPat2
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Thank you, jo.

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