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I Inhaled, You Exhaled . . . YESSSS

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JerryPat2
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How we connected
is so beyond belief.
Our Yin and Yang is poised
as the moon
speaks of the tides.
We thrived on the other
as dusk waited for the dawn.

We gave our love
and it thrived within us.
Passions bloomed
with each passing hour.
Ours were the greatest joy
from your heartbeat to mine

Distance kept us apart
but we walked as though one.
We were like Jupiter's rings
separated but whole.
I breathed in; you exhaled
that's how it was for us.


İMarch 28, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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1 posted 04-24-2017 02:22 AM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

A truly remarkable poem Mr. Bolton that articulated it's way into my own experience. Case in point:
quote:
"Distance kept us apart
but we walked as though one"
Brilliantly relevant!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 04-24-2017 05:22 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

very romantic! To be so in sync is really something quite special. ~L
JerryPat2
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3 posted 04-24-2017 08:15 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Thank you, PU, am very happy some of my poem rubbed off on you. That's always a good thing.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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4 posted 04-24-2017 08:19 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Yes Lori, couldn't agree with you more. Appreciate your thoughts.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

LeeJ
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5 posted 04-25-2017 02:38 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

this was a beautiful write...enjoyed, thank you
JerryPat2
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I so appreciate on your take on my poem, Lee, very much.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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