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Strawberry Cars
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
A poem for my Honey asleep in your chair Where dreams may take you they've sworn not to share Dreams to the sleeping are quite real, indeed But for ones who are conscious they won't feel the need To wander the treetops and soar to the stars placing sweet chocolates on Strawberry Cars Is that what my honey so asleep in the chair sees from her vantage at the top of the stairs There's one way for certain to know if you please "Good Night" friends, I'll join her... and catch me some Z's Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Awww . . . The title had me humming the Beatles song, "Strawberry Fields Forever." What a great poem about your sweetheart watching her . . . "To wander the treetops and soar to the stars placing sweet chocolates on Strawberry Cars" Again, my friend absolutely beautiful. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thanks so much Mr. Bolton! I sure appreciate your comments! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
PU, How delightful and endearing!  ~L |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you Lori Rhoden for your sweet reply! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...james |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thanks James! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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