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P.U Stinkenbaum
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0 posted 04-23-2017 03:02 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

A poem for my Honey
asleep in your chair
Where dreams may take you
they've sworn not to share

Dreams to the sleeping
are quite real, indeed
But for ones who are conscious
they won't feel the need

To wander the treetops
and soar to the stars
placing sweet chocolates
on Strawberry Cars

Is that what my honey
so asleep in the chair
sees from her vantage
at the top of the stairs

There's one way for certain
to know if you please
"Good Night" friends, I'll join her...
and catch me some Z's


Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

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JerryPat2
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since 02-06-2011
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1 posted 04-23-2017 03:59 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Awww . . . The title had me humming the Beatles song, "Strawberry Fields Forever."

What a great poem about your sweetheart watching her . . .

"To wander the treetops
and soar to the stars
placing sweet chocolates
on Strawberry Cars"

Again, my friend absolutely beautiful.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 04-23-2017 05:42 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Thanks so much Mr. Bolton! I sure appreciate your comments!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 04-23-2017 09:38 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

PU,
How delightful and endearing! ~L
P.U Stinkenbaum
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4 posted 04-23-2017 10:10 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Thank you Lori Rhoden for your sweet reply!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JamesMichael
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5 posted 04-27-2017 06:03 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

fine writing...james
P.U Stinkenbaum
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Thanks James!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

 
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