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A Girl so Blue

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JerryPat2
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We knew a girl who was so blue.
Why was she sad we never knew.
We wondered but we had no clue.

Some said she was sad for a man,
Whispers about a girl, Diane,
Who left her and moved to Japan,
We never knew if it were true.

She never smiled and would not laugh,
Walked around like a half-sick calf,
And had a neck like a giraffe,
It always looked a bit askew.

One day she up and went away,
She left a note and signed it Mae,
Said it was time for her to stray,
Searching for llama's in Peru.

İMarch 15, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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Clever rhyme scheme Mr. Bolton. I liked this a lot.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JerryPat2
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Thank you very much, PU.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 04-21-2017 09:11 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Sounds like you had fun with this one. I enjoyed your lightheartedness. ~L
JerryPat2
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I did have fun, Lori. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
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enjoyed reading this...james
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