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Midnight Oil

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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Papers stacked wall to wall
Pale light glimmering over my heavily-grained desk

Words flowing like running water
Tales of heart and poems of passion

From the window I can see her coming
I hear her footsteps and my heart begins to race

Midnight…

She leaves her world and comes to mine
We two, trapped in a forbidden love

Engulfed in flames of rapture
fueling our heated desires

Then, as the light of dawn sears through the panes
she’s gone…

I wrote her that way

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 04-15-2017 03:18 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

And a mighty good way to write her, my friend. You write was basic and put her in the light you wanted her to be seen in. And it works out well for the both of ya.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 04-15-2017 05:42 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Thanks so much Mr. Bolton! I appreciate your comments!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 04-15-2017 06:55 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Inside our heads we are free to paint life any color we like. And if we can spell it we can share it. ~L
P.U Stinkenbaum
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4 posted 04-15-2017 09:51 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

"Inside our heads we are free to paint life any color we like. And if we can spell it we can share it".

Truly fascinating reply Lori Rhoden. Thank you so very much!

If we can share it, may many receive it well, for we are free indeed.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

2islander2
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5 posted 04-17-2017 10:52 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

so lovely, PU, the important i Guess are the sentiments shared during the night, the sincerity of the poem too and the way she moves, wonderful


yann

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Thank you kindly yann. I appreciate your comments.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JamesMichael
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7 posted 04-18-2017 09:54 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

enjoyed reading this...james
 
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